A lot better than your last review structure wise. I think if you want to stand out you need to do something else.

Take Honest Movie Trailers or Zero Punctuation as an example. Do something crazy. Or if you want to talk a lot, look at pewdiepie, his craziness captivates audiences.

I hate to sound like an a****** but I lost interest in yours in the first 20 seconds, I just kept watching to give you some feedback.

Sorry to be a prick, and good luck with your channel.

edit: Maybe edit some of the scenes into your video?

From the 2 posts that I've done on this website from all the videos I've done I've gotten the most criticised and abused messages I've ever gotten.
I started making reviews for friends and for people that generally wanted to know more about these movie and I thought since they enjoyed them why not expand and I thought this website would be an alright place to see if anyone else wanted to know more about these films.

Instead, I'm getting a completely different reaction, people are either trying to make me the next Pewdiepie or whatever else popular youtubers or criticising me because I'm not like them... did I say I wanted too? I live in a small place with 2 rooms total and I'm supposed to put on a play? A scene? Really? With my busy life on top of that?

I think everyones expecting too much because of these popular youtubers since these days it feels more like celebrities and real shows rather than user created content, now I don't hate that content but I'm definitely not trying to become it.

So I'm sorry for all of you out there that think this, I just thought oh little aussie website might be a nice place to meet some people and to talk about movies and games but I think I'll stick to my friends and people I know, I won't post on this website again.

This movie was piss funny. But it was pretty lame too. Jonah Hill needs to branch out.

I actually wouldn't mind seeing that other movie he was in, Wolf of Wallstreet, heard good things about it and heard its funny, gives me something new to watch lol

This movie was piss funny. But it was pretty lame too. Jonah Hill needs to branch out.

Take a look at how Marget and David do it on ABC. The movie cut scenes are most of each review, their comments are very limited towards the end. You've got a great voice for voiceovers so use more of the movie footage. I couldn't last a minute sorry.

People don't REALLY care what you think but if they can see some quick scenes of the funny bits you will make their decision easier.

needs bewbs